***It's my second comment regarding your attendance in Edublogs Student Challenge. But unfortunately I have not received any response yet.***
You are welcome to Edublogs Student Challenge :) My name is Astaneh and as a mentor I will be with you and your cool blog during next 10 weeks. It's GREAT to be creative and for sure it would happen about everything in our life. It's my pleasure to have the opportunity to help to increase the quality of your blog. I work on media as educational broadcasting and also training officer. I think we can make this blog as a shining star by using your creative ideas. As the first step, I think it would be necessary to visit some other blogs joined the challenge in order to find our blog present position. After visiting some blogs with the same article and age, tell me your creative ideas about necessary useful and new tools and design on your blog. What do you think?
You can contact me via E-mail or leaving reply to this comment.
Thanks for your attention and eagerness to develop your network and blogging skills. Actually it's you who is *this blog* admin and owner and your thoughts and minds will be shared in *this blog*. So the final decision about which changes are better to happen in *this blog* is yours :)
As the first step, it would be nice if here we have a *about me* and *about blog* in this blog. By these pages, the visitors from around the world who will search the search engines (for example Google) by the words for example(your details or age or interests or graduating or skills or ...) will find this blog easily. In the page *About this blog* you could write about your topics, writings, subjects, ideas and what will be shared by this blog. Then the first aim (connecting to all over the world) will be happened.
In theses addresses ( http://marahz3.edublogs.org/all-about-mara/ ) and ( http://coltonhz3.edublogs.org/me-myself-and-i/ )you could find the samples. If you put some questions in those pages to know more about the visitors, you can know them as well.
If you are agree with this opinion, try to do the changes and then we will continue :) If you need more help to make these pages, please connect me by E-mail tec.ttc@gmail.com
G'Day Kameron,
ReplyDelete***It's my second comment regarding your attendance in Edublogs Student Challenge. But unfortunately I have not received any response yet.***
You are welcome to Edublogs Student Challenge :)
My name is Astaneh and as a mentor I will be with you and your cool blog during next 10 weeks.
It's GREAT to be creative and for sure it would happen about everything in our life.
It's my pleasure to have the opportunity to help to increase the quality of your blog.
I work on media as educational broadcasting and also training officer. I think we can make this blog as a shining star by using your creative ideas.
As the first step, I think it would be necessary to visit some other blogs joined the challenge in order to find our blog present position. After visiting some blogs with the same article and age, tell me your creative ideas about necessary useful and new tools and design on your blog.
What do you think?
You can contact me via E-mail or leaving reply to this comment.
Mr. Astaneh - Challenge Mentor
tec.ttc@gmail.com
Dear Kameron,
ReplyDeleteIt seems you didn't receive my previous comments.
Thanks for your attention and eagerness to develop your network and blogging skills.
Actually it's you who is *this blog* admin and owner and your thoughts and minds will be shared in *this blog*. So the final decision about which changes are better to happen in *this blog* is yours :)
As the first step, it would be nice if here we have a *about me* and *about blog* in this blog.
By these pages, the visitors from around the world who will search the search engines (for example Google) by the words for example(your details or age or interests or graduating or skills or ...) will find this blog easily. In the page *About this blog* you could write about your topics, writings, subjects, ideas and what will be shared by this blog. Then the first aim (connecting to all over the world) will be happened.
In theses addresses ( http://marahz3.edublogs.org/all-about-mara/ ) and ( http://coltonhz3.edublogs.org/me-myself-and-i/ )you could find the samples.
If you put some questions in those pages to know more about the visitors, you can know them as well.
If you are agree with this opinion, try to do the changes and then we will continue :)
If you need more help to make these pages, please connect me by E-mail tec.ttc@gmail.com
take good care
Astaneh - Student Challenge Mentor